Monday, October 11, 2010

Concentration #2

my paste is wearing off that is why my yellow is going away.. I went back into little red. I made her look more dramatic and red. Again with the door I am hoping to add something inside with another media.
Going to make a window peeking into the house. Maybe having the bed be in the window thus leading into the next page.

2 comments:

  1. Good! I think that I would work on developing the cabin just a bit more in terms of value and mark-making. I also would draw the trees into the roof like and side of the house and then work back over it and develop the cabin. Right now, it looks a bit like the trees are drawn around the house rather than extending behind it. Overall, however, you should be pleased with your project work!

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  2. Emmy I would look back at this piece because I think it's one of your stronger ones. I look at the picture, I know what I'm looking at and it looks pretty. I think you're starting to veer away from this when your research is getting so strong. I would focus more on telling the story, the essential action of the scene that we (the viewers) are all going to look for when we hear "this is the story of little red cap..."

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